Wed 23-Aug-06, 04:27 AM
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Join Date: Aug 2006 Nationality: Romanian Occupation: teacher of English; administratrix Location: 
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Originally Posted by english grammar man Yet, another lesson to present to your students.
Removing unecessary words or slightly editing existing sentences is a great way to buid one's grammar skills. Correct the below sentences by removing unecessary words or editing where required.- We established a joint venture there called Teachers Circle Co. Ltd.
- Next, I'll explain about the new curriculum we've developed.
- I talked with her about my trip to Tasmania island.
- My wife challenged to learn English.
| Hi English grammar man! - We established a joint venture called Teachers Circle Co. Ltd.
I think that "there" is not necessary in this sentence; moreover, I don`t know if "venture" is the right word in this sentence. - In addition to that, I'll explain the new curriculum we've developed.
- I told her about my trip to Tasmania Island./ I talked to her about my trip to Tasmania Island.
- My wife chose to learn English.
Regards,
Teia
Last edited by gfell; Wed 23-Aug-06 at 10:09 AM.
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