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Old Wed 23-Aug-06, 04:27 AM   #4 (permalink)
teia
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Originally Posted by english grammar man
Yet, another lesson to present to your students.

Removing unecessary words or slightly editing existing sentences is a great way to buid one's grammar skills.

Correct the below sentences by removing unecessary words or editing where required.
  1. We established a joint venture there called Teachers Circle Co. Ltd.
  2. Next, I'll explain about the new curriculum we've developed.
  3. I talked with her about my trip to Tasmania island.
  4. My wife challenged to learn English.
Hi English grammar man!
  • We established a joint venture called Teachers Circle Co. Ltd.
    I think that "there" is not necessary in this sentence; moreover, I don`t know if "venture" is the right word in this sentence.
  • In addition to that, I'll explain the new curriculum we've developed.
  • I told her about my trip to Tasmania Island./ I talked to her about my trip to Tasmania Island.
  • My wife chose to learn English.

Regards,

Teia

Last edited by gfell; Wed 23-Aug-06 at 10:09 AM.
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